member request
Hi Teacher Ron!
I'm very grateful for your attentive correction.
I feel I could improve my English soon owing to your kind correction.
In addition, for the corrections of essays you're sure to had mucj difficulties.
It's due to my rough composition and poor English. Reading your corretion or revision, (but it's almost rewriting!) I recognized that in some sentences I made not only grammatic mistake but also troubles with meaning. Paraphrasing into more normal sentences, you partly have changed my original meaning which I intend to express, but it result from my quite puzzling and ambiguous expression.
Your revision is very helpful for me, but I don't want to give you so much trouble.
Thank you.